Eliyes

I need someone to beta the story I wrote for boostlethon. (I'm also asking over on the comm, because I'm paranoid and would like multiple betas. <_< ) The story involves Blue Beetle and Booster Gold, if the comm name didn't tip you off. It's not necessary to know who these people are! I mainly want, in addition to someone to help me spot typos, help figuring out if the ending actually sucks as badly a I think it does, and if it does I need suggestions on how to fix it. ^^; Help!

I am de-privatizing this from the original betas-only post because I'm too lazy to post it anew.

If only things had gone like this when JP showed up... Inspired by Bobby's car.

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