Okay, I need a beta.

[eliyes]

I've got my first Rictor fic for my random_30 prompts, but while I'm confident enough about fic suiting prompt, I'm not sure the story is well-written. ^^; Help, someone? I just need an opinion, and possibly some suggestions...

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[kiffie.livejournal.com]

If I weren't so utterly swamped with homework, I would help. But right now, I'm stuck reading poetry for the next three hours. D:

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

I take it from your D: it's not good poetry?

Would it help to mentally set it to music and picture Mr. Mann singing it?

[kiffie.livejournal.com]

...no, no, that just makes it worse.

A lot worse.

Because now ee cummings is even creepier than it was before. D:

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

ACK! D:

*desperate* So picture him making funny faces?

[kiffie.livejournal.com]

*attempts this*

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(^o^)

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

:D!

[justlikemagic.livejournal.com]

I'll beta for you.

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

Awesome! What I'll do is type it up and post it on my journal in a post locked to just you.

Possibly this will happen tomorrow instead of today, since I soon have to go to work, and then after work I have to take someone to the hospital. No clue when I'll get home. But it'll be posted relatively soon.

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

Posted here (http://eliyes.livejournal.com/244723.html).