*sporfle*

[eliyes]

I'm pretty sure that the reaction this author was hoping for when she wrote and posted this story with a sex scene full of repeated confessions of love and deep, meaningful relationship talk was not hysterical giggling and eventually having to scroll past to a more serious section because being able to breath would be nice.

It is a very good thing she can't see me reading her stuff, then, since that is exactly what keeps happening. XD

Comments

[taichara]

These writers don't understand how sex nor the characters work, do they?

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

Well, the sex was at least physically possible and if they hadn't been yapping the whole way through, it might even have been hot. I'm really not sure, I was distracted. XD

[taichara]

Must have been pretty boring for the characters also then, if they were feeling chatty ;3

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

I dunno, the bit of it I got through, they seemed to be intent on really communicating their feelings, y'know? XD I'm laughing again just thinking about it. It was so out of character! And unlikely anyway!

[taichara]

It's pretty damn unlikely that anyone would do that, really --

Writer-person doesn't get it; hell I get it more than that ~

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

Yeah. XD It was really funny, though! They were just so shmoopy!

Writer-person is clearly into wish-fulfillment, I feel. ;3

[taichara]

Wish-fulfillment with a very large side-order of straight-up fantasy ;3