fanfic (X-Men): "Big Reveal"
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One of the many things which bugs me about how Uncanny X-Men #415 ended has nothing at all to do with the thing with Northstar and everything do do with some basic common sense.
What if it had gone differently?
Hank McCoy made a quiet entrance into the infirmary, conscious of the late (or perhaps very early) hour. He paused just inside the door, frowning. The bed closest to him was empty, when it should have held Jean-Paul Beaubier. The French-Canadian mutant was still recovering from injuries sustained in his recent heroic, unsuccessful attempt to get a child, whose mutant ability to generate explosive blasts was out of control, to safe containment and medical help. Jean-Paul (a.k.a. Northstar) had not been cleared for release by Hank, and yet his bed was not only empty but neatly made and lacking in monitoring equipment or personal effects. Clearly the man had checked himself out while the nurse was still up and about.
He shook his head. He would have thought Annie had more sense, especially after the night's events. He would have to have a chat with her, and with Jean-Paul.
Hank walked past the empty bed and it's neighbour, where Alex Summers (a.k.a. Havok) lingered in his troubling catatonic state. Hank was still trying to unlock the mystery of Alex's condition, but at the moment his purpose for visiting was the patient in the third bed. Mere hours before, a jealous mutant mudman had attempted to kill Hank's dear friend, Bobby Drake. Thanks to the timely intervention of Northstar, Bobby had been saved, though not without sustaining injury. Hank feared that the worst damage from the night's escapade would be to his friend's psyche, considering the events leading to the altercation --
-- But here was a fresh mystery, and Hank paused midstep in befuddlement when he realized that he could see Bobby's costume on the parts of him peeking out from under the sheets. He should have been in scrubs or a hospital gown, as was standard procedure, not -- Hank stripped off the covers in one quick motion -- not in costume, certainly not! And yet the only details lacking were Bobby's shoes and glasses; he even had on his jacket and gloves!
"Completely unacceptable," Hank murmured ominously. Considering the oddly blissful smile on Bobby's face, it seemed likely that the enhanced pheromones Josette had used to ensnare him (before her husband tried to kill him) still lingered in the clothes.
"Great, just great! The whole place is probably contaminated now," Hank muttered as he diverted away from Bobby for just long enough to locate and don one of the air filtration masks that still worked with his face's new physiognomy. He grabbed two more masks, putting one on Alex and the other on Bobby before he set to work stripping away the costume.
When had Bobby started wearing a faux-leather shirt under his faux-leather coat? The last time Hank had checked, he'd been sporting a patterned purple button-up. Implicit was the mockery of the new, so-called "street clothes" of costume that Bobby thought was so impractical. While the frequency of Bobby wearing jeans in public had increased from "almost never" to "seldom" sometime in his mid-twenties, that was the limit. He only wore the leather-look pants because he'd been made to, and would certainly never have been seen in them otherwise. The new shirt didn't make sense.
Hank was careful not to wake him as he removed the gloves and coat. The latter required a certain amount of lifting and rolling. He briefly entertained the hypothesis that Annie hadn't changed Bobby because she'd been unable. Of course, he'd seen her change Alex with practiced efficiency, and he was taller than Bobby, though he was losing weight -- but the costume was more challenging than a paper gown or loose hospital scrubs.
Still, she might have removed the gloves...
Hank unzipped Bobby's shirt, and froze. Not literally -- though he could feel the chill of ice on his fingers where they brushed Bobby's chest. He could see the ice -- the ice that should not be there, since Bobby was asleep. The Iceman had long been possessed of the ability to turn only partially to ice -- but usually it was his hand or hands, when he was using his powers. That was entirely different from this. This was a portion of Bobby's chest, dark and translucent, through which Hank glimpsed organs. It went as high as the bottom of Bobby's throat -- and this explained the switch to high-necked shirts. It spread unevenly: one nipple was ice, one flesh. Hank could see intestines before the ice halted it's downward progression.
This was not good.
And Annie had known about it, he would wager on it.
Yes, they would definitely need to have that talk, and soon, but first he had much more pressing matters to see to.
Cross-posted to
frozen_breaths.
What if it had gone differently?
Hank McCoy made a quiet entrance into the infirmary, conscious of the late (or perhaps very early) hour. He paused just inside the door, frowning. The bed closest to him was empty, when it should have held Jean-Paul Beaubier. The French-Canadian mutant was still recovering from injuries sustained in his recent heroic, unsuccessful attempt to get a child, whose mutant ability to generate explosive blasts was out of control, to safe containment and medical help. Jean-Paul (a.k.a. Northstar) had not been cleared for release by Hank, and yet his bed was not only empty but neatly made and lacking in monitoring equipment or personal effects. Clearly the man had checked himself out while the nurse was still up and about.
He shook his head. He would have thought Annie had more sense, especially after the night's events. He would have to have a chat with her, and with Jean-Paul.
Hank walked past the empty bed and it's neighbour, where Alex Summers (a.k.a. Havok) lingered in his troubling catatonic state. Hank was still trying to unlock the mystery of Alex's condition, but at the moment his purpose for visiting was the patient in the third bed. Mere hours before, a jealous mutant mudman had attempted to kill Hank's dear friend, Bobby Drake. Thanks to the timely intervention of Northstar, Bobby had been saved, though not without sustaining injury. Hank feared that the worst damage from the night's escapade would be to his friend's psyche, considering the events leading to the altercation --
-- But here was a fresh mystery, and Hank paused midstep in befuddlement when he realized that he could see Bobby's costume on the parts of him peeking out from under the sheets. He should have been in scrubs or a hospital gown, as was standard procedure, not -- Hank stripped off the covers in one quick motion -- not in costume, certainly not! And yet the only details lacking were Bobby's shoes and glasses; he even had on his jacket and gloves!
"Completely unacceptable," Hank murmured ominously. Considering the oddly blissful smile on Bobby's face, it seemed likely that the enhanced pheromones Josette had used to ensnare him (before her husband tried to kill him) still lingered in the clothes.
"Great, just great! The whole place is probably contaminated now," Hank muttered as he diverted away from Bobby for just long enough to locate and don one of the air filtration masks that still worked with his face's new physiognomy. He grabbed two more masks, putting one on Alex and the other on Bobby before he set to work stripping away the costume.
When had Bobby started wearing a faux-leather shirt under his faux-leather coat? The last time Hank had checked, he'd been sporting a patterned purple button-up. Implicit was the mockery of the new, so-called "street clothes" of costume that Bobby thought was so impractical. While the frequency of Bobby wearing jeans in public had increased from "almost never" to "seldom" sometime in his mid-twenties, that was the limit. He only wore the leather-look pants because he'd been made to, and would certainly never have been seen in them otherwise. The new shirt didn't make sense.
Hank was careful not to wake him as he removed the gloves and coat. The latter required a certain amount of lifting and rolling. He briefly entertained the hypothesis that Annie hadn't changed Bobby because she'd been unable. Of course, he'd seen her change Alex with practiced efficiency, and he was taller than Bobby, though he was losing weight -- but the costume was more challenging than a paper gown or loose hospital scrubs.
Still, she might have removed the gloves...
Hank unzipped Bobby's shirt, and froze. Not literally -- though he could feel the chill of ice on his fingers where they brushed Bobby's chest. He could see the ice -- the ice that should not be there, since Bobby was asleep. The Iceman had long been possessed of the ability to turn only partially to ice -- but usually it was his hand or hands, when he was using his powers. That was entirely different from this. This was a portion of Bobby's chest, dark and translucent, through which Hank glimpsed organs. It went as high as the bottom of Bobby's throat -- and this explained the switch to high-necked shirts. It spread unevenly: one nipple was ice, one flesh. Hank could see intestines before the ice halted it's downward progression.
This was not good.
And Annie had known about it, he would wager on it.
Yes, they would definitely need to have that talk, and soon, but first he had much more pressing matters to see to.
Cross-posted to
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Date: 2008-10-31 01:58 am (UTC)I like that Hank actually *notices* something, and that Annie the Nurse has actually been hiding stuff.
(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 02:02 am (UTC)I like it too! Annie was hiding stuff in canon, but Hank didn't notice a nyumber of glaringly obvious things with his genius intellect and long exposure to the habits of one Robertus Drakus. So I fixed it.
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Date: 2008-10-31 03:33 am (UTC)Hee!
I wonder if Hank ever spys on Bobby while pretending to be doing a documentary on the Robertus drakus, mapping out eating habits, daily routines, social behaviours and mating patterns?
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Date: 2008-10-31 03:42 am (UTC)I believe he does.
I've seen Bobby do it to him, anyway.
(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 03:46 am (UTC)I bet Hank even made a video version of his, complete with footage of the subject, maps, graphs (both bar and circle) and wardrobe commentary!
(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 03:50 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 03:57 am (UTC)I did have a small plot bunny while taking a shower but it was much different (basically little Ray finds out Logan once killed JP and is very upset about it) and may or may not grow into an actual fic.
(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 04:01 am (UTC)OMG little tteny Ray kicking Logan's shin or something. XD So! Cute!
(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 04:09 am (UTC)Heh, Logan is on Ray's dislike list for life after this discovery is made (not that he was fond of the man before that, he was scary and smelled). Of course in his young mind Logan is now considered a threat to his daddy who will take him from him at the first opportunity so ray clings to JP for all he's worth to prevent it. Of course if it looked like Logan was getting too close Ray may be forced to take action and protect his beloved father with some shin kicking!
(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 04:55 am (UTC)Ray takes to wearing his most hard-soled footgear ALL THE TIME and Bobby and JP have no idea what started this phase.
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Date: 2008-10-31 12:31 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 03:33 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 03:35 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-10-31 04:44 pm (UTC)I'd say a nut shot is definitely possible. Especially seeing as how when I was in kindergarten I basically beat up two boys who were in sixth grade using just that method. >3 (For the record, they were bullies and they were picking on my classmates.)
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Date: 2008-10-31 08:08 pm (UTC)drama
Date: 2008-11-01 12:19 am (UTC)c.f. "Kitty Pryde", "Jubilation Lee".
ALTHOUGH, now I'm thinking "What if Ray met Logan's daughter?"
Hell -- what if Ray met Robert Tanaka? :O Or worse yet, what if Jean-Paul did? When Ray was still really little? Big hairy fit time, I'm thinking! :O
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 12:43 am (UTC)Now, if Ray and JP ran into Opal? Well, it'd be similar to what would happen if Ray ever found himself alone with David's mother.
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 12:50 am (UTC)Okay, actually, that's complicated. Logan's daughter is the child of the leader of a ninja clan, who is being raised by Storms girlfriend (who hates the kid's mom!), and said ninja clan are the sworn enemy's of Opal's gradfather's yakuza clan....
Obviously someday there is going to be a tragic love story involving Robert Tanaka and Wolverine-spawn. ._.
Eh? Which David?
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 12:52 am (UTC)David Storm, Ray's best friend.
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 01:36 am (UTC)Ah, I see. (I know way too many Daves, in real life and in fiction. There's a song about it...)
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 01:54 am (UTC)I'm pretty much always refering to my David. ^_^
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 01:57 am (UTC)D'awww. *ruffles your hair*
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 01:59 am (UTC)Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:01 am (UTC)Bobby: *misses the days when he could visit Wanda and her househusband in New Jersey and be fed delicious feasts*
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:03 am (UTC)Bobby has completely forgiven Wanda in my verse, he knows how crazy he;d go if someone took away Ray.
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:06 am (UTC)This is a good point. So, delicious feastables have resumed? :D
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:10 am (UTC)Sadly, Wanda's continued existance and especially the full return of her powers are a pretty big secret since a lot of people are still REALLY pissed at her so there's not much contact with her unless it's required or they can get in and out without detection. Wanda's only left the mountain once and that was to save Billy and Teddy's daughter from dieing after teddy's body rejjected her. That's how the kid got named Wanda actually.
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:15 am (UTC)I liked Wanda when she wasn't all crazy. And also when she was a man (http://pics.livejournal.com/eliyes/pic/0001paht/g69).
Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:18 am (UTC)Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:19 am (UTC)Re: drama
Date: 2008-11-01 02:22 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-09 07:51 pm (UTC)Seriously though, that bugged me too - yay for fixing it!
(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-09 07:52 pm (UTC)*blushes*
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Date: 2008-11-09 11:33 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-09 11:32 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-12-18 09:53 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-12-18 07:22 pm (UTC)Good job with writing Hanks' POV.
Thank you! I really do adore him, but I find someone so intelligent daunting to write, so I don't do is POV very often.