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"Tango By Two"

The first time they dance the tango, Bobby asks, taking Jean-Paul entirely by surprise. They move across the floor to sprightly, energetic music, testing each other's technique and ingenuity. Five minutes after they finish, Jean-Paul has already forgotten every step of their fancy footwork, memory too full of Bobby's big smile and the delight that bubbles out of them both as laughter, still holding hands as they bow to the applause of their friends.

The second time they dance the tango, they have a much better idea of how their bodies move together, and every move is charged with this thing between them. Jean-Paul drives Bobby across the floor as much with his gaze as with the music. Laughter has become intensity, smiles turned to shuddering want as they slide and strain together in the dance. This time they have no audience, and when the music ends, they fall into bed.

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Date: 2010-09-15 08:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
HOW do you this, tell so much story with so few words? And what a story! I simultaneously want moremoremore and am ...satisfied seems like the wrong word?...satiated? with what there is...does that even make any sense?

Ugh. Cannot brain. Story good. So them. Love it. I go.

ALSO

Date: 2010-09-15 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
I seem to recall us having a conversation about how extremely hot Jean-Paul going slow for someone else is/would be? SO true. Jean-Paul+the extreme control and measured-ness of pace of a ball room tango=SO HOT. Same goes for Bobby. GUH.

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Date: 2010-09-15 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jo-the-phoenix.livejournal.com
I ditto Helen's "GUH". Very awesome story. Very hot. I wish you would write/post more... :)

*hugs* Helen! :D

Date: 2010-09-15 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
I don't know! I confess I've been trying to write a fic where they tango for years. Actually, about four of them. I kept getting tripped up trying to describe the action and failing. Then tonight, as I was explaining my frustration to [livejournal.com profile] timemonkey, he made a comment about the differnt possible tones of a tango, and this appeared in my brain.

I am so glad you like it! I may take a shot at the tango again someday, but at last I have a Bobby/Jean-Paul tango fic! *relieved*

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Date: 2010-09-15 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
Thanks! I wish I would write/post more, too. I keep getting writer's clock a couple pages into stories, and I am not posting WIPs if there's a chance I'll ever finish them.

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Date: 2010-09-15 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jo-the-phoenix.livejournal.com
I understand. But you could private message me your WIPs... that would be like getting little bits of wonderfulness via email. XD

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Date: 2010-09-16 11:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
XD Well, thr problem with that scheme is that I don't type things up until I'm done.

INDEED.

Date: 2010-09-16 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
aaaaaaaaaaaaand now I want to write something expanding upon teh hotness, leik woah, but beyond that premise, I got nothing. hmmm HMMMMM


oh yeah, and there is that other problem, the one where I haven't been ableto write anything in over a year. Damnit!

:D *hugs right back*

Date: 2010-09-16 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
Ahahaha, I know that pain. For...oh, about as long as I have been in fandom, I been contemplating a Guardian/Ward Regency AU for them. I'll write a little, plot a little, go back to novels with a similar plot/feel to what I want for indspiration, makes notes about what I need to research...and feel overwhelmed, and give up.

[livejournal.com profile] timemonkey is a terrible</strike?terrific enabler, isn't he? I'm glad you're glad I like it! Hee! I really do! Relieved, eh? *sweeps back curtain to reveal fainting couch* Recline! Recuperate!

I FAIL FOREVER AT HTML.

Date: 2010-09-16 04:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com


...um, what to blame...ah...am at my parents for a few days, and under the influence of spoiling, have regressed to a child again? Or something.

GASP!

Date: 2010-09-16 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
You have regressed to a time before you knew HTML!

I do that all the time, me, I just go back and edit like a ninja, unless my responder has replied like a superninja.

Also, time-saving tip: you can type <s> and </s> instead of <strike> and </strike> and still get delicious strikethroughs the same effect. ;3

Re: :D *hugs right back*

Date: 2010-09-16 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
WHO IS THE GUARDIAN AND WHO IS THE WARD?! I MUST KNOW!

*ahem*

...Yeah, I still have that "Gar Logan decides to pursue a stage career" AU to finish ...that was the reason I decided to get a journal in the first place... ^^;

I'm glad you're glad I like it! Hee! I really do! Relieved, eh? *sweeps back curtain to reveal fainting couch* Recline! Recuperate!

I'm so happy we're both so happy. ^_~ *faints away, delirious with joy (and allergy medication)*

*stares into space for a moment, imagining...*

Date: 2010-09-16 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
I wish you would, but I understand. I hit that "but I have no plot" wall all the damned time.
Edited Date: 2010-09-16 10:34 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2010-09-16 07:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jo-the-phoenix.livejournal.com
*throws up hands in disbelief and dispair* Sigh....
;P

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Date: 2010-09-16 09:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
XD Sorry! I do have a teeny computer I could cart around with me to type in, but I'm actually banned from having it with me at work, so I stick to notebooks.

Besides, if I type some of it, my brain decides I'm done and shorts out! Lazy thing. My brain shorts out enough mid-fic as it is without adding complications to confuse it.
Edited Date: 2010-09-17 01:52 am (UTC)

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Date: 2010-09-16 09:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jo-the-phoenix.livejournal.com
Obviously my brain shorted out with the inability to type "despair" correctly.

It's all good, especially since I see you've just put stuff on dA. :)

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Date: 2010-09-16 11:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
Yes, and you made me post more! *shakes fist*

Neat-oh!

Date: 2010-09-17 09:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
Oooh, thank you for the pro-tip regarding 's' rather than 'strike'...just need to you, know, put in the < >'s properly! Heh.

Aaaaand, I'm too lazy/stingy to pay for an account, so no ninja editing for me, I just have to look at my typos in shame. SHAME!

Re: :D *hugs right back*

Date: 2010-09-17 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
I am ever so pleased to have peaked you interest so, Miss. Heh. JP's the guardian and Bobby's the ward. Does that satisfy your curiousity, or...do you want to know more, now? *evil laugh*

ahahaha, one day, we'll get those monkey fics off our respective backs...one day...




p.s. Oooh, that is one pretty pretty icon!

*alas, is distracted*

Date: 2010-09-18 06:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
Doesn't even have any entertaining graffiti!

Re: :D *hugs right back*

Date: 2010-09-18 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
Interesting! I am not actually a reader of Regency novels, generally, so I'm not sur ehow many of the tropes I'll recognise if you ever posted this. If you want to tell me more, though, go ahead~ ;3

One day. *sigh*


Isn't it? :D I wish I knew who the artist was, I just know it's from a Russian postcard that was BANNED IN THE UK when it came out. XD Possibly because of the bared breasts I've cropped out.

Re: :D *hugs right back*

Date: 2010-09-19 06:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
ahahaha, it's all so amorphous really, I wouldn't know where to start...esp as you question got me thinking 'surely it is obvious that JP is the guardian! How could Bobby be the guardian? I mean, he'd have to be...and the twins could be...and it could work because...'and now I have a whole other bunny!

*siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*

BANNED IN THE UK?! My word!

*snuggles right up, and brings tea* :3

Date: 2010-09-19 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
Ha ha, extra bunnies. I laugh at you because I love (and I know the feeling). Anyway, I asked because I know it can go either way in an AU, but of course in canon, Bobby is older. At least, he is when he's not being de-aged by foolish writers. *SIGH*

I wouldn't know where to start.

*ostentatiously shuffles some papers* I've taken the liberty of compiling a short list of questions, drawn from a list of Regency tropes that I found on the internet. *ahem*
1) First of all, do you mean the literal Regency period, i.e. years 1811 through 1820, or the looser definition of "anywhere after the Seven Years War, ending in the crowing of Queen Victoria"? Just curious.
2) Is this just set in the Regency era (whichever one), or does it fall into one of the romance novel/story categories involving the time period, those being "Regency romance" (cerebral comedies of manners, usually rather brief, with scarcely a hint of sex) and "Regency historical" (torrid bodice ripper that just happens to be set during the period, usually not very historically accurate, especially as they didn't, strictly speaking, have the type of bodices that get ripped in bodice-rippers during the Regency period)?
3) Is either man a reformed or going-to-be-reformed rake?
4) With there be a ginormous mansion?
5) Will there be bare-knuckle fighting and exquisite clothing? On the same man, usually?

;3


I got it here (http://www.sappho.com/vintage/RussianPostcard.html), along with a numbe rof other things I've used as icon bases, including this icon. As the site says, it would have been considered HARD PORNOGRAPHY in the Soviet states. There's a nipple! Quel horreur!

*bring home-made cinnamon shortbread biscuits*

Date: 2010-09-20 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
Foolish, foolish writers...do you think it may be something in the water in the offices? 'Cause foolish artists cannot get Bobby's colouring right, either!

*is awed by the paper shuffling and trope researchery*

1) I hadn't really picked a year, but I'd like to set it during the literal Regency, although a lot of Regency Romance takes the wider 'early 19th C' definition...more so that I can use The War as a plot device than anything else, really...

2) HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, brilliant question. Um. I'm going to say...all of the above? I do want to make use of the tropes of Regency Romances but wanted to go a little further along the sensuality-o-meter than Heyer...but not as far a a bodice rippoer, though...(not that I don't enjoy them from time to time!) (and not just because given the main chracters, there would be a distinct lack of bodices to rip...although I DO have plans for a Bobby inna dress caper...). I suppose 1980s/1990s era Amanda Quick would be a good comparison of what I'm aiming for?

3) Yes!

4) Yes!

5) Yes, yes, yes!?

XDDD


oooh, so much pretty...
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
...um, I have no idea why there is a question mark at the end of the response to (5)....maybe my subconcious is telling me something?
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
You were just THAT emphatic.

*loves you forever, seriously*

Date: 2010-09-20 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
I know! That splash page reveal of OMG BOBBY NO POWERS fromM-Day, where he was blond? I photoshopped that to haev the write colours hair and eyes by sampling earlier art. Looks good. *drools and the site of all that skin...*

1) You're gonna kill off the ward's family in the War, I suddenly predict. Am I right?

2) I have only heard of Georgette Heyer recently, and no nothing of Amanda Quick (except that she sounds like a DC character), alas. Still, middle-ground I gte.

3) Yay! \o/

4) Yay! \o/

5) Yay yay yay! *\o/*

X3


I know. *sigh~*

Re: *loves you forever, seriously*

Date: 2010-09-23 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
ahahahaha, taken out of context, there is no way of knowing that the subject of the splash page is Bobby, except Scott's speech bubble. Nothing, I tell you
*joins in drooling*

1) Nope! Although, I suppose I could work that in, too...

2) I have this wierd thing with Heyer, where I dread reading her books, but then when I do, I find that I love them! Ahahahaha, Amanda Quick is the name that Jayne Ann Krentz writes historicals under, and they are more historicals than Regencies, now. But yeah, middle of the road and fairly spicy...

Re: *loves you forever, seriously*

Date: 2010-09-23 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
Well, and Bobby says, "So, what? Is that it for Iceman?" And he's been running around in those cargo shorts for a while. Alas. Still, context.

Re: *loves you forever, seriously*

Date: 2010-09-24 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hybridhelen.livejournal.com
...I am an idiot! I can't believe I forgot that there's a bobby speech bubble too! umm...I was distracted?

*facepalms, forEVER*

Re: *loves you forever, seriously*

Date: 2010-09-24 09:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
X3 These things happen! Especially where nearly-naked Bobby is involved!

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