http://jo-the-phoenix.livejournal.com/ (
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2006-10-19 06:19 pm (UTC)
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Cool.
I found an error I missed the first time: your use of the phrase "reign in" as Jean Paul struggles with his temper is incorrect. "Rein in" should be used.
Otherwise, all is well in my eyes. :)
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I found an error I missed the first time: your use of the phrase "reign in" as Jean Paul struggles with his temper is incorrect. "Rein in" should be used.
Otherwise, all is well in my eyes. :)